Nothing

Words about nothing

Written by no one

No one will read

 

Photos of nothing

Taken by no one

No one will see

 

Music for nothing

Composed by no one

No one will hear

 

Roads that go nowhere 

Through valleys of nothing

driven by no one

 

No darkness

No light

No joy

No sorrow

No pity

No laughter

No heartache

No memories

 

Just nothing

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[RachelReaper]

sounds like floating in an in-between universe. This is rather haunting. Very eerie thing to paint in my imagination.

[Baby Ricochet]

I'm an Eerie guy. Well, maybe only sometimes. Thanks for the review

[RachelReaper]

welcome

[Meallea Pomorette]

The picture was really creepy.. And now I fully understand why...
The descriptions are a bit sad... I can't imagine something like that to happen to me... Because while I'm reading this, I can imagine dark images...

"Written by no one"
Now that will be creepy don't you think???

"No darkness
No light
No joy
No sorrow
No pity
No laughter
No heartache
No memories"
This sounds like a description of a person who had given up one living...
Cheer up!!!

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you for reviewing nothing Meallea

[Meallea Pomorette]

My pleasure...
(^_^)

[Sirius King]

i have nothing to say...
get it? "Nothing" lol

dont mind me man...lol

good stuff

[Baby Ricochet]

HA! Thank you for reviewing nothing Serenus

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Such a desolate thought. This is a dark journey into the "What if..."
Thought provoking write!

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you for reviewing nothing Robbie

[Patricia B. Hepler]

Keen insight into the darkness of a soul.

Excellent. *pat

[Baby Ricochet]

thank you for reviewing nothing pat

[An owl on the moon]

Even in this great absence you fill the hollow with substance... So often we come to feel that all around us is of nothing.. leads nowhere.. And sometimes we have to fight to see more.

[Baby Ricochet]

thank you for reviewing nothing craig

[Coyote Poetry]

Your words are true. Un-read and un-seen picture are useless. I believe best gift to a writer is to read their words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you for reviewing Nothing Coyote

[Persephone]

Simple poem, I like it - Reminds me how social of creatures we are, and if we don't make things for others....we might as well be nothing - great work

[John]

It's a melancholy conclusion - just nothing. It's correct. It's fair, and more writers' bubbles should be pricked! But with 500 friends telling them how good they are, are you going to be listened to?