Lover's Touch Senryu

Her lover's touch

Gently caresses her soul

She glows warm inside

Author's Note

Working short is helping me express beauty. Maybe I'll stop being such a hard ass in the real world.

Reviews

[Angi]

Baby, I rarely get to see this side of you. I quite like it! Lovely. Angi~

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Angi

[Patricia B. Hepler]

Beautifully written.
~pat

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you pat

[The Refined Poet]

Ricochet, you are definitely warming up and writing some beautiful pieces. A nice one for sure...

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you sir

[DrD]

You're quite right, BR. When you have the need to condense and economize your words, you discover their useage to a much higher level. You're doing well, my friend.

[Baby Ricochet]

thanks doc

[That_Girl]

Sweet yet temporary distraction possibly? They're definitely lovely to read. :)

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you

[SamanthaMarie]

Right, sometimes just a few words go so beautifully together that they need no others to distract from them.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you

[chandlerl]

Another short masterpiece. Loved it.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you

[Seamstress]

Gads I do know that feeling so very well. Just his words and I knew his touch and passion.

[Baby Ricochet]

That's beautiful

[KAOlmsted]

I felt this one all the way to my bones...excellent write. You've hit the mark: beautiful.

[Baby Ricochet]

I have my moments

[Tai Ryens]

I thought this was fairly gentle and heart-touching. Fine job.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you