The Antagonist

For someone I knew and everyone who thinks big, muscular and southern equals stupid and easily duped. Surprise b*****s!!

You never listened
to a thing that I said
All you saw me for
was a big muscle head
Or maybe my accent
threw you off track
You thought gray matter
was something I lacked
I knew what you wanted
on that you were clear
you were running on
deception and fear
Behind your lies
was a devious mind
I saw through you
Every last time
You were an image
Well so am I
You never stopped
to wonder why
I always seemed
an impossible task
To get on your side
so you never asked
I heard what you said
I knew what you meant
It was all bullshit
You'll never repent
You can fool some of the people
But you'll never fool me
You can fool some of the people
But you'll never fool me

Reviews

[Tai Ryens]

Looks deceive, and my most potential evidence are serial killers with IQs over 155 and 'so much potential!'

[Baby Ricochet]

Ha. Thanks Tai

[Z. Shepherd]

I love the gray matter joke

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Z

[Michael G.]

A true modern day Southern gentleman.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you MR G.

[saratogaparty]

Uh oh, I hope this never happens. To be found out I mean.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thanks for reading Saratoga

[Marie]

Isn't big, muscular and Southern enough for any woman?

[Baby Ricochet]

My experience says no.

[Inda]

Sometimes is hard to see trough the bullshit and then you do and you realized what the smell was. Great piece!

[Baby Ricochet]

Thanks bro

[DIVYA]

One must never judge a book by its cover.
Your anger shows through!
Well such people truly deserve your wrath!

Very interestingly written and made for a great read! Thanks baby!

[Baby Ricochet]

thank you divya

[KeeD]

Women and their deceptive ways.. can't seem to live with them or without. Mind f**k.. Great write BR.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Keegan

[Tate Morgan]

vERY ON THE SPOT.MAN RARELY SCOPE OUT A WOMANS MOTIVES AHEAD OF TIME wE GENERALLY GIVE IN TO THE EMOTION THAT FLOOD US AND VALVE LEFT WIDE OPEN WHEN SHE SAUNTERS BY LOL

[Baby Ricochet]

That's for sure.