Little Fawn

Seducing a much younger girl

    Young delicious beautiful girl
       Oh how you drive me wild
     Body blossomed into woman
          Face of a virgin child

With graceful girlie perfect curves
      and flawless glowing skin
You smell like girl and candy canes
    You make me dream of sin

   An animal sway is in your walk
         Just like a little fawn
Come sweet Doe eat from my hand
       Oh God you turn me on

   I'm old enough to be your daddy
        and girl you know I'm not
  You have so much to learn from me
     What boys your age know not

     Look behind thee oh little fawn
           A wolf is on your scent
       I have to feel it deep in you
             My K-9 soul's intent

       I'll sway you into anything
       I've got a demon's charm
    With a cocky can do come on
         You're easy to disarm

    Spinning you in a spider web
         I'm weaving in the air
     Win you like a carnival prize
       and lure you to my lair

 I'll come on like your lesbian lover
        Seductive sweet and pure
Tease you taste you gonna break you
         I'll be your sweet allure

Oh my little fawn don't you know
      The moon and stars align
Before this evening turns to dust
      You're gonna be all mine

Author's Note

Thank you for reading and I hope you enjoyed "Little Fawn."

Reviews

[RachelReaper]

lolz If a girl falls for charm she deserves to be used. Your poems always entertain :D Great one.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Rachel

[Jack...]

My friend, when I am having a bad day I stop here and everything seems good. Nice one.

[Baby Ricochet]

Ha! Thank you Jack.

[~Nina~]

I like it. Very descriptive; I could actually picture this girl in my head. Well, aside from the fact that there is a picture, of course. Anyhow, I loved the use of words and details. The theme, also! Obviously a tale of a man obsessing over a girl, especially with the phrase, "You're gonna be all mine" in the end. Excellent work! If you don't mind, I'd appreciate it if you'd stop by my profile and check out a few of my works. I, too, am an aspiring writer looking for opinions. Thanks! Keep up the great work! Write on! :)

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Nina. I would be glad to.

[Marie]

I've seen your picture, and you could get whatever girl you wanted. But I know you won't go after the really vulnerable ones.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Marie.

[TL Boehm]

so someone told me that in order for me to be officially a cougar - I would need to divide my age in half and then add 7 - which would mean - any beef aged less than 31 years would get me cougar status. I can't even register veal on that scale. Maybe its different for women. I don't know. I do know that some girls - young girls really do look physically older than I think me and my friends looked as teens. And with the internet - its so easy to get yourself out there. And there are young women who are focused on their physical appearance so much more than I was at that age - because we do so much 'social networking.' Still - there's that whole "jail bait thing" - My older spawn is 21 - has a gorgeous girlfriend - and I'm relieved because - well - he likes girls and he's over 21 - and that can get him into trouble. All my weird parental rambling aside, this was an interesting poem - I can grasp the concept of that "internal predator" - well penned.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you TL. Fashion's changed quite a bit since back in the day. Piercings, Tattoos, low riding skinny jeans, big hoochie ear rings, the Emo look and so on. A beautiful 20 year old girl in skinny jeans and a tight crop top with a pierced navel and tongue with big, dangling ear rings, a tramp stamp and emo style make up is going to drive any straight guy completely out of his mind.

[TL Boehm]

YUP! ( kinda like ginormous sparkly earrings myself ;))

[Rita L. Sev]

Flawless rhyme in this naughty piece, Mark - you take the reader into the mind of the "wolf" vividly.

[Baby Ricochet]

thank you Rita

[Divyanshu Kachhap]

Naught one :)

[Baby Ricochet]

Thanks

[Rene Velez]

"Tight like a Tiger" LOL, hey what can I say, who doesn't admire ripe fruit so to speak LMAO, good poem Ric.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Rene

[Cassie]

This poem is great, i liked reading it from the moment I started, u make me dream of sin..whoo!!! has left me with a smile on my face.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Cassie

[Ees]

I'll tell you what part made me stop reading and freaked me out a bit:
" Body blossomed into woman
Face of a virgin child"- I know that it isn't how you meant it, but the image that popped into my head was that of Ellie, one of the kids that I coach, she grew 7 inches last year and her body is taking it's adult form, but she's a baby, just turning eleven. I know you weren't thinking of any such thing, but the unfortunate pairing of words startled me and certainly turned off anything that might have been hot in the beginning.

[Baby Ricochet]

Eleven!?!? Uh, no. Not what I meant.

[Ees]

I know it isn't what you meant! That is just all that I could see in my eye. It's a danger of working with kids!

[Baby Ricochet]

Yeah. I can understand that