Lovers Dance

Pick you up in my lover's dance
Throw you into a spin
For you I'll dance so beautifully
in sacred lover's skin

Swirl you around like Aphrodite
with Aries in a maze
Achilles with a lover's fire
My heart and soul ablaze

The fates weave tales of lover's bliss
Pegasus breaths your name
Dance on the wings of fantasy
A satyr you can tame

Dancing on the breaking beaches
swirling through the sand
Moving you with Beelzebub
My guiding demon's hand

Dancing in the Pagan circle
around the phallus stone
Lust for flesh has deeper meaning
Than muscle blood and bone

Pick you up in my lover's dance
Throw you into a spin
Hear sweet music beckoning
Calling you from within

Reviews

[DIVYA]

Awesome! I went into a spin reading this. Heady stuff. Baby, this is pure talent talking! Compliments!

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Divya

[Will]

You never cease to amaze. An imagery laden, emotion-inducing, passionate masterpiece. A piece with superb rhyme, and beautiful metaphor scattered throughout. One of the better pieces I've read in a whole, and you really got me going with this one. Great write.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Will. I'm genuinely flattered

[Pryde Foltz]

Lust for flesh has deeper meaning
Than muscle blood and bone

Am oooh phrase for me. Great write.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Pryde

[Saumya]

wonderful....!!!
well done..!!

[Baby Ricochet]

Many thanks Saumya

[Saumya]

highly welcomed..!! :)

[emmajoy]

' Swirl you around like Aphrodite ~ with Aries in a maze ~ Achilles with a lover's fire ~ My heart and soul ablaze '

What word.painted pictures you've set stanza by stanza, great meter too! Plus the mythical names and touches add even more to a very exciting poem. An ideal read after an almighty storm! Love the pic too, love the tango!

[Baby Ricochet]

thank you Emma

[emmajoy]

You're welcome.