Bravo! Bravo! Now that just disproves the saying that you can't make a silk purse from a pig's ear (!). Bravo! Sheer joy to read, style and content, a real world in one poem. Encore!
Though this poem has some dark humor in it , more so it has so many truths about
this world we live in - Well written and i had to lol when i read your authors note... i was
wondering when i read that verse but bovine fits better than swine lol
Good poem.
This is great! The rhythm, the images, the under lined theme, tethered with double bladed meaning This felt real to life to me. Like the cattle resistance you conveyed lead to slaughter ,this hit home, and I am cut and packaged and still processing the meat you put into this very vivid well put together piece....great job!
I like the way you made a poem about the realistic confusion people fail to see this time around. If they think they are in a world where no problems are present; they are wrong. They should look at the whole; and this poem definitely shows, how people kill to survive.
I love this... I don't know why... It's just such a great representation of the evolution of our world, a magnificent political statement. Actually reminded me of Animal Farm, because animals and politics. But really great job Baby. The world is definitely twisted here..
I write just for the hell of it
A way to spend some time
Blurting out in cyber space
Whatever's on my mind
Maybe funny maybe tragic
Emotional and raw
Politi.. more..