Whoa. This was powerful and intense. You have shared the truth of our modern times and how greed and power and using fear to achieve agenda where they prey on the weak minded and exploit this great country along with others in the world for money and influence . A great political statement ...Bravo
Awesome stuff man, are you vegetarian? haha reminds me of something a righteous hippie would say. Is it wrong that I find this hilarious rather than sad? You sick f**k! hahaha
serious one.
Nice. I dig it. It flows exceptionally well. Great job. Says what it is supposed to quite clearly gets the point across while being easy to read and flowing on. Great combination. Great job!
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Thank you Ees. It's good to see you back
10 Years Ago
No prob.
I am going to try and stick around bit more this time. haha.
Holy s**t, I really wish I knew how to give an intelligent review to this powerful piece. It's a true punch to the solar plexus of society...the takers and the taken. Your friend in words, Pete
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Thank you Pete
10 Years Ago
You're certainly welcome my friend. I always look forward to your reviews of my offerings as well. .. read moreYou're certainly welcome my friend. I always look forward to your reviews of my offerings as well. Your friend in words, Pete
wow. there are several aspects of this that i like, the first one being the brutal truth within it and the awareness you ignite, second your ever fitting word selection and rhyme. I also admire your finesse in delivery of such a subject. Very profound and inspiring piece of meat you have here. Thanks for sharing. :)
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