I wrote this for someone's stupid contest

I wrote this for someone's stupid contest

A Poem by Baby Ricochet
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Just letting off some steam

"
Great poetry is depressing
That's why my poems suck
I'm either pissed off or funny
So my a*s is outta luck

I wrote this for some contest
I'm never gonna win
Maybe if I blow the judges
That'll give me an in

It's called depressing poetry
For verses oh so sad
I'll enter their f*****g contest
and make the judges mad

My girlfriend's real pissed off at me
So she's not putting out
If that's not enough to bring ya down
What else have I got

Ya know this Monday's Veterans day
and I'm a bloody Veteran
We were deployed to lovely Iraq
When they went sectarian

Don't worry pookey I'll spare details
Maybe another time
If that's not enough to be depressing
This is my last rhyme


© 2013 Baby Ricochet


Author's Note

Baby Ricochet
If I don't win I at least hope not to be blocked by whomever's contest I'm desecrating

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levity is a very good thing! Well done.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

7 Years Ago

Thanks TL. I didn't win the contest
Well if you didn't win at least you gave them something to think about

Posted 7 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

7 Years Ago

Lol! Thank you Eddie
Poetic perfection, this one certainly gets my vote !

Posted 8 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

8 Years Ago

thank you tom
Reality at its finest lol

Posted 8 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

8 Years Ago

I thought so
Maybe you didn't win,
But you ligthened up that depressing contest!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

8 Years Ago

that's what I was saying. Thank you inda
I love defiling poetry. I hate structure...I hate the norms. Some call it stupid...but some might call you brilliant.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Baby Ricochet

8 Years Ago

Thank you Muse. It's good to see you
Truly irreverent ... & I like it!
Seriously - Thank you for your service.
pat~

Posted 8 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

8 Years Ago

thank you pat
I must ask, did you get blocked by said contest manager? Twisted humor is the best humor, how lovely! well done, Baby R. Well done indeed.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

8 Years Ago

I don't think I have but I haven't checked. thanks TaI
I always love your twisted sense of humor. Good write my friend!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

8 Years Ago

Thank you sir
Lolz Sounded Fun To Me , I Think Ur Sarcastic Writing Made Her SMile My Friend HEHE
I Like It & No Is Not Sad
Or Depressing Is A Sad Fun Case If u Ask ME

Posted 8 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

8 Years Ago

Thanks for stopping by onepiece

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