You said I was Objectifying

You said I was Objectifying

A Poem by Baby Ricochet
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Just a quickie

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You said I was objectifying 
But you're in skinny jeans 
Your perfect little pear shaped a*s 
Keeps whispering to me 

Halter top stretched oh so tightly 
Over those comely breasts 
Playful midriff peeking at me 
I'm dreaming of incest

I don't even have a sister
I'll just pretend it's you 
You said I was objectifying 
but look at what you do 

You tease a satyr with that walk 
You drive the beast insane 
Has it ever occurred to you
You're helping the refrain 

You said I was objectifying 
Well I suppose that's true 
With chicks like you prancing around 
What am I gonna do 

© 2014 Baby Ricochet


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Yep, another witty piece Ricochet, funny stuff.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

8 Years Ago

Thank you inda
Poor men! How can they ever resist? And Ah! women playing a tease as always.. Good work!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

8 Years Ago

Thank you annabella
I think you make a great but daring point. Its a compliment to be objectified if you dress for it. Funny and well penned :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

9 Years Ago

It depends if she's attracted to the guy and If he doesn't say something stupid.
Quite true, and funnily put.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

9 Years Ago

Thank you Daniel
This is very funny and mature. You are very good with rhymes...I think Limerick suits you well too.
And I strongly agree with you. Sometimes women are dress inappropriately though sometimes they are not aware of this. Some do it intentionally. They might sending the wrong message. " Grab Me " Please don't get me wrong. Women's curves are one of their greatest assets. And some know how to play this well for their own personal agenda, vendetta and advantage.

If you're open for suggestion There's a room for improvement on your piece on the First Stanza
Fourth line " Keeps whispering to me " Instead try " Keeps whispering in my brain "
Its softens the landing and the last word is not stress ( syllable ) too much. It rhymes a little bit with jeans. Well written piece ~ Author Unknown




Posted 9 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

9 Years Ago

Good idea. Thank you
So true Baby! What can a man do?
Thanks for a great read. I liked it a lot.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

9 Years Ago

thank you Divya
So true. I'm a woman and I am so damn tired of idiots in my gender blabbing on about being objectified. I think you hit this snib of drama right on the head.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

9 Years Ago

Thank you Quirklet
HA! Oh lordie, Baby this made me laugh so much! LOL

Posted 9 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

9 Years Ago

Thank you Noodle. Glad to give you a giggle
....sounds like a tease to me BR!

:) Julie



Posted 9 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

9 Years Ago

That's what I'm saying
The Great and Mysterious Contradiction. Women dress so we'll look at them then get pissed when we do. ROFL

Posted 9 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

9 Years Ago

For sure. Thank you Mark.

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