A Memory Lost

A Memory Lost

A Poem by denise

your taste lingers.
fog stretched out like veins
enveloped me like a thick blanket
where i wanted to find comfort
to disappear
an illustrious lover.
a hopeful forever fairytale
all-consuming
not wanting to forget
a period of peace
a place with sunlight
now dark.
forever lost

© 2015 denise


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denise
first poem I put on this site! excited to put up the first chapter of my novel! hope you liked this!

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Heartfelt work Denise. Imagery was great. Look forward to reading more. CD

Posted 5 Years Ago


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denise

5 Years Ago

Thanks so much! I truly appreciate you taking the time to read my work! i will return the favor! ;)
Such beautiful sadness in your words. I felt a soft pain as I read them. I really appreciate you for sharing this.

Posted 5 Years Ago


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denise

5 Years Ago

Thanks again, Jennifer! Your reviews are so honest and helpful!
I like it a lot Denise. dana

Posted 5 Years Ago


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denise

5 Years Ago

Thanks so much, Dana! I was so nervous of what the feedback would be- for any of my writing! I love .. read more
h d e rushin

5 Years Ago

no need being nervous Denise. There are good and honest people here......love, dana
denise

5 Years Ago

Thank you! ;)

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Added on March 10, 2015
Last Updated on March 13, 2015
Tags: memory, sunlight, fairytale, forever

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