if we were..

03-12-12

If i were a flower and you were my

bee

i'd give you the ocean and you'd be my

sea

im like oxygen and your

CO2

you can't live without me and me without

you

your like my other half the smoke to my

high

when im with you im always myself no need to be

shy

theres a connection between us like air and like

earth

but if you really love me let me know what im

worth

 

 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the poem. Good flow of thoughts in the poem. Those untested questions leave us wondering till we died. I like the complete poem. Good use of language making the poem have reason and purpose. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[A poet's heart]

Nice poem, I love the theme, the beginning reminds me a little of the song 'All I want is you' from Juno (incase you might like the song) :). I also love the last line, showing that even love takes effort. Great.

[Kimberly "Melody" Carne..]

A very rich and powerfull poem. Thank you for sharing.