Limerick-2

Limerick-2

A Poem by Devanshu Rajput
"

In my effort to make you laugh

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© 2013 Devanshu Rajput


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That is some head of hair. I am happily bald by choice! Well done!

Posted 8 Years Ago


a man has different gears
good menagerie, you got for yourself
HAI!

Posted 8 Years Ago


much obliged for yer sharing this with us all

Posted 8 Years Ago


well well this is quite the humourful one ;)

Posted 8 Years Ago


the king of the jungle the lion , hmmmmmmmmmm this is quite a elusive one :)(

Posted 8 Years Ago


That's what I call a =DO= ! (Or a Don't) Did he have a permit to keep all those animals up there ? *Grin*
Awesome Limerick !



Posted 8 Years Ago


This was funny. A good thing to read in the morning. I liked it. Good job. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


A well penned limerick. I like the humor. Good rhyming which I always enjoy. An enjoyable read. Write on.Thank you for sharing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Devanshu Rajput

8 Years Ago

I'm glad that people are liking my attempt. Thanks for reading.
ShelleyA

8 Years Ago

You're welcome.
Was the man's name Noah? Couldn't have been easy for his barber.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Devanshu Rajput

8 Years Ago

I also think.

May be he did't have money to go to a barber.

Thanks for rea.. read more
That was an inspiring limerick to read. It inspired me to write this gift poem for you which you may keep as your own:

Hair Problem

Jake was filled with fear.
In his hair, there sat
hundreds of small deer,
elephants and cats.
Also staying here
were giraffes and bats.
All would disappear
in soap mixed with fats.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Devanshu Rajput

8 Years Ago

Wow....wow.....Really a nice gift.

I am glad that you liked it.

Nice to me.. read more

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Added on June 23, 2013
Last Updated on June 25, 2013
Tags: Limerick, humor

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Devanshu Rajput
Devanshu Rajput

India



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