Limerick-2

Limerick-2

A Poem by Devanshu Rajput
"

In my effort to make you laugh

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© 2013 Devanshu Rajput


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Really good rhyme and rhythm.. would have love to see what else could happen. But it was good in making me smile.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Devanshu Rajput

8 Years Ago

Thanks for attributing your time and give review.

With best wishes,

Devans.. read more
Patrick O'Neil

8 Years Ago

No problem.
I like the poem. Nice flow of words. It did make me smile. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Devanshu Rajput

8 Years Ago

Thanks sir for the compliments.

Devanshu
Haha very clever and unique...it does exactly what a limerick should do. Nicely done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Devanshu Rajput

8 Years Ago

Thanks. I really appreciate your words.

Devanshu
great one my friend..I would put It Harboured 10 Cats as it rolls better...but great really

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Devanshu Rajput

8 Years Ago

I amended my writing as per your suggestion. Thanks for your gratitude.

Devanshu
LOL...what fun! I love it!

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Devanshu Rajput

8 Years Ago

Thanks for giving your time .

Devanshu
Ha! Fun, and well constructed, limerick!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Devanshu Rajput

8 Years Ago

Thanks for the compliment.

Devanshu
LOL good one :) definitely gave me a chuckle.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Devanshu Rajput

8 Years Ago

Thanks.

Glad you liked.

Devanshu
Hahaha...Very funny...:)...

Posted 8 Years Ago


Devanshu Rajput

8 Years Ago

Glad it made you laugh

Devanshu
Sami Khalil

8 Years Ago

It did. You are welcome...:)

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Added on June 23, 2013
Last Updated on June 25, 2013
Tags: Limerick, humor

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Devanshu Rajput
Devanshu Rajput

India



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