Limerick-2

In my effort to make you laugh

A man with different name gear.

His hair sadly caused him fear.

In it lived ten cats.

Two elephants and three bats,

Hundreds of Giraffe and a deer.

Reviews

[Patrick O'Neil]

Really good rhyme and rhythm.. would have love to see what else could happen. But it was good in making me smile.

[Devanshu Rajput]

Thanks for attributing your time and give review.

With best wishes,

Devanshu

[Patrick O'Neil]

No problem.

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the poem. Nice flow of words. It did make me smile. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Devanshu Rajput]

Thanks sir for the compliments.

Devanshu

[kublakhan27]

Haha very clever and unique...it does exactly what a limerick should do. Nicely done.

[Devanshu Rajput]

Thanks. I really appreciate your words.

Devanshu

[Dr. Wood ?]

great one my friend..I would put It Harboured 10 Cats as it rolls better...but great really

[Devanshu Rajput]

I amended my writing as per your suggestion. Thanks for your gratitude.

Devanshu

[Angel]

LOL...what fun! I love it!

[Devanshu Rajput]

Thanks for giving your time .

Devanshu

[Rita L. Sev]

Ha! Fun, and well constructed, limerick!

[Devanshu Rajput]

Thanks for the compliment.

Devanshu

[Mark]

LOL good one :) definitely gave me a chuckle.

[Devanshu Rajput]

Thanks.

Glad you liked.

Devanshu

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha...Very funny...:)...

[Devanshu Rajput]

Glad it made you laugh

Devanshu

[Sami Khalil]

It did. You are welcome...:)