The Third Eye

The Third Eye

A Poem by Devanshu Rajput
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The third eye sees when you tell your mother that you drunk the milk,

But it had gone into a flower pot.

 

The third eye sees when you say: “homework is chopped by my dog!”,

But it had not.

 

Third eye notices when you break the pot,

And blame your little brother.

 

Third eye sees when you eat pancakes,

When your parents went outside.

 

Third eye sees when you say you are doing your homework,

But you are reading comics.

 

The third sees when you watch television,

More than you’re supposed to be.

 

Third eye sees,

Which we don’t see.

The third eye sees,

Which you don’t want to show.

 

© 2015 Devanshu Rajput


Author's Note

Devanshu Rajput
Beware! May be the third eye is watching you!

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Pax
I can only see three possibilities:

One is the own self’s reflection- the one will always see's the truth of what you do… can be a state of conscience but i believe some people doesn't have that treat... so i can tell to those person who create the mirror self-reflecting images in the mind... there are many types of human consciousness and it holds the key of all the truth we hold on into..

Second one is the government spy gadgets – like Big brother is always watching us… even in the internet all our mail have been filtered for terrorist messaging… I have studied about that on how the government filters all the information around the sea of information(internet)… our privacy is always invaded like freedom is constrained.

Third is God – in the spiritual aspect I always knew God is always watching us, he works in a very mysterious ways… his the only higher being who can see pass through the façade we portrayed- he will always see the real you…

Awesome work my friend!


Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Devanshu Rajput

10 Years Ago

I totally agree with your all possibility.

Really God, Self's reflection and Government.. read more
Pax

10 Years Ago

your most welcome :)
Dani The Unreviewed

8 Years Ago

Yup, this makes sense.



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Does it know? Does it understand what it sees, is it compelled to see, or is it a voyeur of sorts.. or .. ?

The third eye is so many things in this world of 'do whatever i want'. i think of it as Conscience, or... maybe, self awareness wed to denial. We do things as children, as adults, and when doing them, peer left, right,eft and right, hoping not to be seen... eating pancakes! There's more than ethics in your poem, there's charm and a gently put warning that we're never quite alone. Perhaps.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Nice thought...and unique writing too. Third eye!!! Its sometimes hilarious, sometimes threatening,overall good piece. :D

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Devanshu Rajput

7 Years Ago

I just don't know how you came across this poem of mine. Have been inactive since ages. Well, thanks.. read more
Ayushi Beura

7 Years Ago

My pleasure...Happy Diwali to you too
Yeah my dear friend - What the third eye cannot see? Can we call the third eye Paramatma? Really God inside us is seeing everything we do! So your poem is full of spirituality and truth! A great hug!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Devanshu Rajput

8 Years Ago

It seems you have opted to read my old works, when I was very young and almost like a write in the w.. read more
"Third eye sees,
Which we don’t see.
The third eye sees,
Which you don’t want to show."
Perfection at its best. Great work Devanshu :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Ha bringing the conscience to the fore, our guilt at misdemeanors. Nicely described.
First line is the word 'eye' missing or was it left out on purpose?

Posted 8 Years Ago


Devanshu Rajput

8 Years Ago

Thanks for bringing it to my knowledge , I will soon amend it.

Thanks for stopping by.. read more
How talented you are. Great work and so clear your message. Love your work

Posted 8 Years Ago


Devanshu Rajput

8 Years Ago

Thanks for all your reviews, they are much helpful.

Devanshu
andrew mitchell

8 Years Ago

No thank you ! you are the helpful one !!!!
nice Devanshu :) Perfect and clear!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Devanshu Rajput

8 Years Ago

Thanks for reading and for sparing kind words.

Devanshu
I just reread this poem again Dev! Its been about a year and I find the message is still spot on! I am glad that you are still writing, as you have unlimited talent to show the world one day!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Devanshu Rajput

8 Years Ago

It means you have reviewed me once? I will keep writing, to my last breath. I cannot think of anythi.. read more
I like how this poem shows such great range of possibilities. To me the whole time I thought the third eye you were talking was the eye of our soul. Every time we do something wrong, it sees and notices.
For a firm believer in God the third eye would be His eye. He sees our good deeds and the bad ones too. This was really well written. Nice to see you grow, brother. A 100 from my side for that.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Devanshu Rajput

8 Years Ago

Thanks for reading. It is comical poem. But, it can be also seen that way.

Devanshu
Shivam Murari

8 Years Ago

Yes I did sense the humour (or humor :P), but then that is already too obvious to state.
I love it:) Yeah, it holds something we can call 'meaning'. The third eye looking at me right now is probably seeing Hell's flames... hahaha just kidding:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Devanshu Rajput

8 Years Ago

lol......Thanks for reading. I am glad you liked it.

Devanshu

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