Unraveling 3D (dreams desires desperation)

Some words I thought I'd string together see where it goes

Picking at the sack
Ashes of past dreams
Grab a handful
Walk out to a bluff
Let the wind cleanse
My soul
Opening my palm
Freeing those ashes
I regret nothing
I just smile
Lost in my memories
Thinking life is a new adventure
"where are we goig today?"
Went back to the sack
Dug my hand deep
Let the coolness of the ashes
Take me back
Feel something wooden at the bottom
Pull out 3Ds
Eyes go cloudy
Grey haze covers them
Inner storms raging
Clutching the 3Ds
Closing her palms
Chocking off the air
That they need to survive
Crushing them
Till they snap
The storm is over
Gentil misty showers
Fall from her cloudy eyes
The 3Ds are gone
Unstiitching the sack
Opening windows and letting
It drift away

Author's Note

Warning watch for grammar and spelling they're out there :)

Reviews

[roy mccarthy]

nice write!
i like it!