just 2 little boys

just 2 little boys

A Story by DiANA

 

                                    JUST 2 little boys

 

 

 

 

 

Two 9 year old boys who are best friends find a gun at a park on their way home from school. They think its fake so they decide to shoot it to see if its real. They were taking turns shooting at each other until one of them took the safety lock off and blew his best friend’s guts out.                        

 

 

 

  1. the boy who shot the gun
  2. the boy who got shot
  3. a man walking his dog
  4. an old lady sitting at the park
  5. a boy on a bus driving by
  6. a man fishing in the lake nearby
  7. a women jogging

 

 

 

 

 

     Is he really gone?

 

1. I have a blank stare

    I don’t want to go anywhere

    He’s all that I had for a friend

    Will I ever see him again?

    They tell me don’t blame yourself its not your fault

    I know this feeling will never be forgot

    I should’ve never been playing with a gun

    There were two of us standing

    Now there’s only one

 

 

   

 

 

 

 

 

  What can I do?

 

2. My life flashed before my eyes

     I felt a sudden burn inside

     I put my hands on my stomach

     And I felt the blood flourish

     Suddenly the feeling went away

      I had no more pain

     There’s no point in crying

      It finally hit me… I’m dying.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

  Innocent little boy

 

3.  Well I was walking my dog at the park

     and I suddenly heard a gun shot

     my feet got cold

     my palms go sweaty

     I was kind of scared

     I was not ready

     Should I duck?

     Should I hide?

     But it was just a little boy

     It was an innocent life

 

 

 

    A bloody mouth

 

4. I was feeding the birds and I heard two little boys talking about a gun. I didn’t really pay any mind to them. Then I heard a loud noise. I wasn’t sure what it was but soon after I heard an agonizing cry. I knew something was not right. I saw the same boy run. Carrying a small gun. As I walked to where he was I saw the other young boy lying on the ground with blood coming out of his mouth.

 

 

 

 

Red light

 

5. I was on the bus and we were at a red light. I looked outside and I saw 2 boys fighting for a gun it looked like they were playing but then I saw that one was observing it for a long time and pressed like a button on the side. They were conversating and I heard them laughing a little and then when the bus drove off I heard a shot and a scream. Then I heard a lot of people screaming. And a couple minutes after, when I was by my house I heard the ambulance. Then I knew what happened.

 

 

 

 

 

      You can put the blame on me

 

6. Well I was getting my things out my truck because I was going fishing. I set my stuff up and was getting ready. Two young boys ran through and knocked some of my things down. I made them come back and pick things up. They were really nice about it. I asked them where they were headed. They said to the park, so I just gave them a ride down there. They got in the back and were whispering about something and pulled out a gun. I thought It was fake so I acted like I was scared. We laughed for a little and then when I dropped them off at the park I stayed there for a little bit and noticed that they were playing around with it.; acting like they were shooting each other. Then I realized it was real because of the noise that it was making when they kept shooting it. That’s when I ran out the truck to go stop them, and that’s when one of them took the safety lock off and shot the other in the stomach. I felt as if I did wrong. I was disappointed in myself. Why didn’t I realize this earlier? Why didn’t I get there sooner? One thing I do know is that this will haunt me forever. He was a good kid.

 

 

 

 

 

     Fading

 

7. It was an ordinary day

    I saw many kids play

    Just on a daily jog

    I didn’t see it through the fog

    I swear they were just playing

    Now one life is fading

   

 

 

 

             

 

© 2008 DiANA


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