Perfection

Perfection

A Poem by Dianne

Perfection a path
Travel east, continue, improve
Not north, dead end road

© 2008 Dianne


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That was one of the shortest prose poem I've read in a while, yet it sure does mean a very long list of things. I can't really say one simple thing about what I see in it, because there are too many meanings and I can't pick one to answer...

Anyway, it's real nice and simple read. Somehow, it just gave me a lot to think about...


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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seems to me that you know in what direting you're going in life. great work.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Good thing someone gifted me a compass on this site because my GPS is broken and I really dont need to hit any more deadends in my life! Diane I enjoyed your Haiku!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Mysterious. Simple, concise, yet ambiguous. I like it!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That was one of the shortest prose poem I've read in a while, yet it sure does mean a very long list of things. I can't really say one simple thing about what I see in it, because there are too many meanings and I can't pick one to answer...

Anyway, it's real nice and simple read. Somehow, it just gave me a lot to think about...


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thought provoking.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The sun rises in the east... travel toward a new day... yes? There is always a new day, another chance to get it right... to strive for perfection.

A heavenly arrow might point the way, but it's cold in the North. I'll leave that region for fairytales and polar bears.

I'm not sure my inner compass keeps me pointed in the right direction. I seem to find myself on that closed road in spite of plans and careful mapping to the contrary. Hmmm. Some literary GPS... I like it.

Thanks Dianne

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a cute and witty 5-7-5. Thank you for sharing

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Dianne
Dianne

Livermore, CA



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