Essence of Sunshine

Essence of Sunshine

A Poem by Dianne
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American Haiku

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Bees drawn to honey
Distilled of nectar rare
Essence of sunshine

© 2008 Dianne


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Can totally picture that.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

beautifully written and transpiring, lovely imagery, and nicely expressed, keep up the great work.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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beautifully written. in some wierd way i could almost feel and picture myself in a field of some sort of yellow flower, unrecognizable by the smell. so sweet and so calming. the air so cool with the sun shining in a clear blue sky. great write. love it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful and simply so. Thank you for the refreshing read.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Reminds me of the purity of Emily Dickinson. Loveliness in every word.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Honey indeed is the essence of sunshine...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is nicely done!

You did pack lots of meaning into these 3 lines. Good imagery. Nice analogy.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I don't know much about haiku but I love this piece. Each word counts and fits to make a delicious morcel packing so much for its size. Beautiful.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Liked the parallel of the essence of sunshine with the honey of distilled nectar rare.


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was cute! It reminds me of watching some of our old neighbors gather the honey from their behives. Honey is a very beautiful thing, especially when the sun is shinning through it.

Kansas :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Dianne
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