Essence of Sunshine

Essence of Sunshine

A Poem by Dianne
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American Haiku

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Bees drawn to honey
Distilled of nectar rare
Essence of sunshine

© 2008 Dianne


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Essence of Sunshine would be a great brand name for honey, dont you think? They could put your Haiku right on the label!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.



The next time I taste honey I'll think of this poem, Dianne.

Nice poem - I love bees.



Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I feel as though I have just sipped sunshine.
It's beautiful and it's you..An American Haiku

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nicely penned, regarding the second line and the missing syllable, Basho was not one to sacrifice beauty for form.

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Essence of Poetry

Well done.

The simplicity of this piece is its beauty. Your words are nectar for my poets soul.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

An American haiku? What does that mean? Second line needs one more syllable if you are following the 5-7-5 rule. As for the haiku, it is an excellent image. Good work.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Dianne
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