I'm a...

Continuing a theme...

There's a fear

of

getting caught

for the lust

in my heart

which is NATURAL for a man

expected to be. . .

                                Boy Scout

                                     father

                                          handy man

                                               money maker

                                       spiritual guide

I did learn how to 

light your fire inside                       

play Daddy for you

                        operate "tools" 

                              work up a sweat

now. . .

we usually keep these feelings

 under lock and key

so. . .

peer beneath

the veneer

in the dark recesses of the mind

and you may find. . .

there is a need 

for reckless pleasure

my question to you

while you're

naked as 

a jaybird. . .

have you learned. . .

the back seat rhythm

will you be. . .

my rocket queen

will you scream out 

loud enough

when we play rough

to make

 

all the demons in hell blush

when we feel our blood rush?

Author's Note

Reviews

[Stacey Watts]

There is alot of truth in this. We fear the taboo and the unknown I think.Sometimes it is alright to set inhibitions free. I agree with Muse on this one. I hope that you don't feel like I am copping out on a review. I just don't know that I can put it more eloquently. Very well written here and thanks for the friend request. I look forward to reading more of your work.

[The Analog Kid]

No problem...thanks for the comments...I do the same thing from time to time:)

[R. L. Ives]

Dang, this is one moi caliente piece of writing. I nearly screamed YES!! by the time I got to the end lol. Seriously though this was really fantastic.

[The Analog Kid]

Why thank you very much, again:) My friend Muse on here was doing a series of racy and dark stuff. I was trying to compete. She like them enough tto post them on here page -which is flattering:)

[R. L. Ives]

You're welcome. And that would be very flattering. I have read some of her work...very dark and racy for certain, but amazing.

[The Analog Kid]

:)

[KAOlmsted]

Ooh la la...I figured, I'm here, why not check something new out...I love Berlin, by the way. This is such a great piece...why do we do this? I mean, we all have those strange desires in us...some stranger than others ;-) but we seldom act on them, even with the one person we claim to trust the most...I don't know, Kid...we're a quirky lot, we human beings. I absolutely love that last group of lines...oh my...I certainly hope so ;-)

[The Analog Kid]

You rock Kimmer. Thanks for stopping by! We are such twisted beings:) Hell yeah on the screaming:P

[KAOlmsted]

...and pull my hair a little ;-) just don't pull the zip ties too tight xD

[The Analog Kid]

Haha..like heavy duty ones the cops use! LMAO!

[KAOlmsted]

Now you're playing to my uniform fetish *blush* I may need to go take a cold shower ;-)

[The Analog Kid]

Haha..good to know!

[KAOlmsted]

;-)

[Kenneth The Poet]

This is like a seduction scene from an 80's film I think. The dialogue crackles with life, and it makes me think that the woman in question is going to boil your pet rabbit whether you like it or not.

Great piece, one of your best.

[The Analog Kid]

Thanks brother Ken. Much appreciated!

[easybreezy]

WOW! Very well done. Some people frown on these kinds of feelings a behavior, but I say if both parties are willing, then more power to ya ;)

[The Analog Kid]

Thanks..something different for me. I appreciate it.

[Lily Mae]

Holy schnags... I love this. To many people hide this passionate raw part....the world would be a happier place if we had this balance in our lives.. Well done with a blush my friend..xo

[The Analog Kid]

Thanks Lily. Yes, indeed. It was a blast...not my usual..thanks so much XO

[Lily Mae]

I could make a funny about the word blast but I will behave lmao..xo

[The Analog Kid]

haha!

[The Analog Kid]

The turn table is hypnotic...

[Muse]

There is a well-known stereo-type that a Mother...Father...we cannot think dark thoughts? Sex must stay behind closed doors...because well you know...can't have the children knowing that we are creatures that are capable of feeling passion. Lets not speak of it...let us ignore it...we are carnal creatures by design...the only thing that makes us different than animals is clothing?

And yes...this will pass. Very well done my friend. No you did not steal from my inspiration...you paid it a rather large compliment...so for that...THANK YOU.

[The Analog Kid]

Thanks this was fun. I really appreciate the opportunity to step into your style:)