Calm Relation

Calm Relation

A Poem by Dimple Nahata Jain

It will be an easy road
If we can overcome the obstacles
Misunderstandings wont be there
If we wish to solve it forever

© 2015 Dimple Nahata Jain


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nice message... good one...

Posted 5 Years Ago


There is fun in misunderstanding and there is love before and after it....

Posted 5 Years Ago


It will be an easy road
If we can overcome the obstacles
Misunderstandings wont be there
If we wish to solve it forever

Whole words have their whole and deep meaning inside it.
Great write dear friend. It is such a skillful write.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Dimple Nahata Jain

5 Years Ago

thank you :)
I get the depth of what you've tried here, there's a million ways I could interpet this one. Its amazing how you've given so much freedom to the readers imagination on this one. cheers! :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


Dimple Nahata Jain

5 Years Ago

thank you :)
Lovely wording!!
Keep it up!!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Dimple Nahata Jain

5 Years Ago

thank you :)
I like the simplicity - it also mirrors the point of the poem (as I read at least :)): that things do not need to be more complicated then what we make them out to be.
This is just a preference: 'forever' seems somehow a bit flat compared to my expectations from the previous three lines.
Overall, I liked it :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


Dimple Nahata Jain

5 Years Ago

Thank you for the review.... I m glad that you liked something about it.
I would be pleased i.. read more
Mai L Nissen

5 Years Ago

I do not have a word that springs into mind... But what I mean is your imagery in the first three li.. read more
"It will be an easy road.
If we can overcome the obstacles.
The misunderstandings won't be there for us.
If we wish and overcome the barriers.
This can last forever."
A very good poem. You could expand to more. I like the journey and the thoughts in your words. Thank you for sharing the poetry.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


Coyote Poetry

5 Years Ago

You are doing very well. Writing is practice and learning. I receive help from a few kind India teen.. read more
Dimple Nahata Jain

5 Years Ago

That's great.
Your reviews are really helpful :)
Coyote Poetry

5 Years Ago

I'm glad I could help..

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Added on February 27, 2015
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Dimple Nahata Jain
Dimple Nahata Jain

kolkata, westbengal, India



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