Pain

Pain

My empty eyes bore into an invisible focus as I numbly lay

The objects abreast me sluggishly fading

Cheeks stinging from briny tears crossed with malevolent altercation

Why address me as grotesque than statuesque?

Is not each individual beautiful?

Your mind feverish above the cold heart

Mind over matter and mind over soul

Have you any mercy for me?

I can distinguish your shadow, gray and deep

It hovers over me and I pray

Please take the agony away

 

 

 

Reviews

[Stephen]

Love's pouring into the ink through your feelings of your red heart. The combination of emotions and love, I've founded into the piece...I mostly hate to see tears into beautiful ones's eyes but sometimes, I love cause I believe if they don't cry then how the demons can get an opportunity to kiss n drink those sweet tears which always immortal the souls. I adore this poem.

[SonOfPlunder]

Brilliant flow and very good use of the right words. Very nice piece

[Pól]

This is quite good.
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[Einstein Noodle]

the feeling is palpable ... in reading i find myself wanting pain's release ... like .."get it off me!" ... whew! so grateful for poetry eh!?
E.

[Justin]

I wish this was a song. Thank u for sharing

[Steven Croat]

very deep and well written...

[Sami Khalil]

"It hovers over me and I pray

Please take the agony away"

The agony is palpable in this write...:)............

[writ rajat]

this poem remove my pain thanks for writing this

[John Ryan]

this is truly beautiful.

i love how well you put emotion and depth into this.

well done. i look forward yo your future writing.

[Calissa Knox]

You write with sincerity, depth, and insight. This is a wonderful piece of your heart. Thank you for sharing!

- Feather