The Hum of God

A poem about the heart of God

The hum of God

                Fulfills the flowers,

                                Petals bowing silken heads in attunement.

 

The thrum of God

                Lulls the Lilly

                                To sleep soundlessly beneath blackberry brambles.

 

The rhythm of God

                Weaves between swaying violets

                                Peeking out from under green cloaks.

 

The mind of God

                Creates the story of the stars

                                Blinking across the darkened sky.

 

The music of my name

                Shines upon thy lips, a kiss�"

                                A seal upon the vastness of God.

 

I find my way to the heart of God.

Reviews

[Kenneth The Poet]

Nature at its finest. Sounds like something Spinoza was thinking long ago.

[arbitrary jane]

i like the steps of this. and the dissection of the bits and pieces of God we see in each small thing.
perceptive and thoughtful.

[Veronica Chandler]

Excellent write, the style and word placement is delightful and inspiring. I absolutely love this wonderful piece.

[Aidz]

I am not a religious person but this is an excellent write

I quite enjoyed this Audrey well done

[emmajoy]

Praise all that is beautiful and hold it close! What a wonderful poem to read on any day but especially the day of rest. Thank you for sharing it.

[Ladysue]

This is so gorgeous and meaningful...i love the form of the peace too..flows beautifully...

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Now this is one amazing write. I sincerely enjoyed this write.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Audrey this reads like a magnificent prayer.

[Judy Ponceby]

Audrey, this is beautiful! I love the lay out of the poem. And the beautiful images of nature relating to God's mind, inspired! :) Wonderful write.