A Story by Mr.Cardigan

one of my raps with dets on the video


(takes place in an allyin time square between two life long friends ant night)

Boy: yo dude what the f**k why you so pissed

Boy2: you know why you got all this money and you can't help me out

Boy: bro im not going to help pay for your drugs

Boy2: please im done after this

Boy: no im not going to allow you to through your life away and sure as hell not going to help

(Boy2 pulls a gun)



Every song I sing leaves me covered in sores

Every rap I rap cuts a little bit more

Every note I hum takes the skin form my bones

Every beat I makes leaves me awake

At night I lay in my bed thinkin why am I so sick in the head

So if my stuff ain't enough well thats a shame

So stop playin the the blame game cuz i found fame and you didn't cuz your lame..... man you should came

It would have been fun having you by my side but you decided  to run and hide and lied to me

You quit so quick i couldn't see it then threw a fit and lit this s**t on fire

It's your fault so your cryin as were buyin lions , flyin , and trying to get to the top

Hope you love working and mickyds as were flyin through life with ease

You mad bro good now enjoy the damn show watch me blow up to the top with a single pop

Watch this thing end with a one shot.....BOOM!........

...........^^^.......^^..........^...............long beep.................

Nurse: is he dead doc

Doctor: yes, stop the machines

Nurse: Time of death 2:32PM  11/25/97

(parents, brother, sisters, and fans crying)




© 2012 Mr.Cardigan

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Posted 8 Years Ago

Lina Grey

8 Years Ago

you're so freakin cool :) awesome rap buddy but I don't like the time of death -_-

Posted 8 Years Ago


8 Years Ago

ill try
♪The Girl Next Door♪

8 Years Ago

thank u :3

8 Years Ago

and ohh batman AWSOME!!!!:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


8 Years Ago

Oh Wow, Lovely.

8 Years Ago

Okay first off, I LOVE IT it tells a good story and it's sad ! but your good at rapping or making raps what ever you call it uhhmm your good!

Posted 8 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


8 Years Ago

thank you
Oh Wow, Lovely.

8 Years Ago

Aaha yes!

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