LIFE SHOULD BE

JUST A DREAMY WRITE Is a pantoum form

Here in lilac scented hums,

I drift in serenity and dream

Floating along sweet escape

Nothing but breeze to caress.

 

I drift in serenity and dream

Feelings calmed each breath

Nothing but breeze to caress

Just  weightless and free

 

Feelings calmed with each breath

Don't wake me from this rest

Just weightless and free

Oh this is how life should be.

 

DOC DYR 

Reviews

[Wildecat]

This is a beautiful poem, welcome to writers cafe.

[imm's place]

very calming and flows gently , mary

[darkgurl]

"Feelings calmed with each breath
Don't wake me from this rest
Just weightless and free
Oh this is how life should be." Oh how i like these lines here, a very lovely well written piece here....Kim

[T]

So beautiful and soothing, Doreen ... Lovely imagery ... hugs