Not Anymore

Not Anymore

A Poem by Doroteja Tia Tolic

Don't touch me
It's over-finally
That merry-go-round has stopped
Hear me 
one more time-before I go
Don't believe you anymore

Thought you would show me stars
But didn't see anything 

Cold room-everytime
We stood there alone
There's no going back-again
What we had is gone
Now do you miss me?
You can want me back
But i'm not coming around again
Like before

Not anymore

Smiling away
Didn't know you never cared
But now i do
Praying for miracle to come
To make a better person out of you
Could it be
I'm wrong once more

© 2013 Doroteja Tia Tolic


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Interesting, but I'll get back to that...A powerful expression of self-revelation and strength, written concisely. But it is either a compassionate heart in the midst of the madness that makes 'her' pray for him/her or an underlying hope for change, possibly to rekindle...which makes this interesting and keeps a feeling lingering, at least with this reader.

Enjoyed reading this, Thanks

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on May 27, 2013
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Doroteja Tia Tolic
Doroteja Tia Tolic

Osijek, Hrvatska, Croatia



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I write mainly for myself, to express every emotion,every fear, everything I feel. But I also love when others read my writings, because that's the only way you can get through to my soul, and my dee.. more..

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