... Of Wind, Hills and Love

Unfinished poem about love and how nature nurture love.

Sounds echoed through the winds
Telling words that all listens
Yet nobody understand what it says
But comfort it always brings

Cold breeze mellows a hot day
Perfected by a snooze under a tree
lonely heart finds solace by the sea
whispering words of mystery

Hills stood still in wilderness
Sad and lonely; it always seems
Craddled by persistent blowing winds
Keeping it at peace and asleep

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Author's Note

This poem is still in progress...

Reviews

[Gee]

Hi Mary,still a work in progress or consigned to the "can't be arsed?",a feeling I know all to well!.It would be a shame if you didn't finish to your liking as what is so far written is a fine poem to read.

[Mary Goldwin]

Thanks for the inspiration. ;)

[Gee]

You are most welcome.

[Effector Prime]

it could be (in progress) but what was wrought thus far, sure is fantastic :) thanks for penning and sharing compadre :)

[Mary Goldwin]

Thanks for that very positive comment.

[Effector Prime]

Thank you :)

[A. Amos]

You took on such a beautiful joyride with your poem, I congrats you on that. Looking forward to read more of you.

[Karen]

This poem is beautifully written and truly evokes thoughts of Nature, beauty, and love. I really enjoy the images and it brings to mind (for some strange reason or another) thoughts of a lighthouse where there is sweet isolation and refuge in the surrounding waters and breezes. I love this poem and wonder what kind of progress will it undergo...

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i like this calm ending. actually for me it s this poem very hopefull. also you have done very good job with words . it reading very nice for me. thanks and keep writing

[Motivation4Life]

Very interesting :), touchy and emotional, I would just advise to add punctuation at the end of each line. Otherwise good work and finish it :)

[Mary Goldwin]

Thanks for the positive comment, Richard L.P Campkin and Raven Rees.

[Richard]

This was really like a breezy day in the evening where the sun was getting lazy and going down and there's a tree and a beach maybe but one that nobody goes to often ... I really enjoyed that a lot lot

[NA]

Beautifully done... :)