Hidden Feelings

Hidden Feelings

A Poem by Bianca La Salle

With all the things I feel inside
I find it hard to run and hide
This pain I feel is so unreal
It takes me spinning, like a wheel
It doesn’t stop, it just keeps going
Like a never ending story
I’m struggling to do this right
And it seems to be putting up one hell of a fight
No matter what I won’t surrender
Even if it makes me suffer

With all these things I feel inside
I find it hard to run and hide
The voice I hear only gets louder
Shouting at me “you’re a loner”
The silent screams I can’t release 
Seem to haunt me in my dreams
 
It doesn’t stop, it just keeps going
Like a never ending story
I find myself on a journey
Trying to solve this disturbing mystery 

I’m struggling to do this right
But I can’t seems to find the light
With every step that I take
Only seems to bring me heartache 

The pain I  feel is so unreal
I’m unable to handle this ordeal 
I’m quietly falling apart
Leaving me with a broken heart

© 2011 Bianca La Salle


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I’m struggling to do this right
But I can’t seems to find the light
With every step that I take
Only seems to bring me heartache

this stanza touched me to the chor! so much like how i'm feeling right now! raw emotion is always the most elegant to me! and this is fantastic! i loved it!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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nicely done

Posted 9 Years Ago


well put

Posted 9 Years Ago


I love this!
It's amazing how a poem can make you feel so many things at the same time even when you write or read ,And this poem really is strong with emotion
beautiful.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow! This is just, pure, and raw emotion. It's absolutely wonderful. It really touched me.

"I'm struggling to do this right
But I can't seem to find the light
With every step that I take
Only seems to bring me heartache

I really relate to that stanza, and it's great to see it portrayed in such a way. Great job!

Posted 9 Years Ago


I’m struggling to do this right
But I can’t seems to find the light
With every step that I take
Only seems to bring me heartache

this stanza touched me to the chor! so much like how i'm feeling right now! raw emotion is always the most elegant to me! and this is fantastic! i loved it!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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A Poem by Bianca La Salle