Chapter Eleven

Chapter Eleven

A Chapter by The old me

Chapter Eleven: Is this right?

So a few days passed. The two thought about each other the whole time. The woman woke up one day and knew she needed him back in her life. So she sent the man a message.

Woman: So I couldn’t stop thinking about you. And I know it’s not right to make you suffer being around me, but I need you.

Man: I have been thinking about you too. I’m glad you messaged me. I want to be there for you.

Woman: Is this right? I don’t want you to suffer.

Man: I want to be there for you, I need to be there for you.

Woman: As long as you’re sure about it. And unfortunately I have something bad to tell you, I made a mistake.

Man: I’m sure. What happened?

Woman: Please don’t get mad, it’s making me cry just thinking about it.

Man: What happened?

Woman: I slept with my ex.

Man: Ok... I’m not mad.

Woman: I feel terrible about it. I knew it was wrong to do, and I really regret it.

Man: It’s fine. I know why you did it.

Woman: It will never happen again. And if it’s any help to you, I was thinking that it was you, the whole time.

The two continued to talk to each other every day and continued to have their feelings for each other grow. It grew and grew to the point of one day; the woman had to tell the man how much she actually felt for him. So she told him:

Woman: Well you challenge me every day, in a good way. And I've never been this close to someone so fast... It usually takes years to fully let them in. I love you, that’s why it's extremely hard for me to talk to you sometimes because I know it's not going to go on forever. That's why I feel like I have one foot out the door with you... It's not fair. I literally can't breathe sometimes because it hurts... You make me happy but I can't be happy with my problems and so it just hurts more... I'm sorry I told you I was messed up.

Man: You're not messed up at all. I understand why you feel it's unfair towards me, but I don't care, I want to be here. I don't care if it's only for bit, because I'll enjoy every minute of it.

© 2011 The old me

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I dont know if I could stay. I have been thinking about it as I read this. I dont think I could be with someone has they die, it would destory me for the rest of my life. And I'm already fucked up.

Posted 9 Years Ago

I hope they meet before she dies. You're doing a good job of keeping the story interesting--she's not just dying, she slept with her ex...plenty of twists. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago

i know what this feels like, and im understanding what ur talking about more and more

Posted 10 Years Ago

I hope they improve their situation somehow.
So sweet, good job Derek

Posted 10 Years Ago

yaaayyy, chapter 11 :)

man derek, this is great :) i reall cant wait to find out what else happens...

Posted 10 Years Ago

I haven't read the other chapters but an interesting dialogue nonetheless. Thank you.

Posted 10 Years Ago

Oh it's so romantic yet sad at the same time. The woman seems sad yet happy. The man appears to finally be happy and is greatful. Great read. Excellent. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago

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