Chapter 12

Chapter 12

A Chapter by The old me

Chapter 12: Love

Love can be a great thing. The greatest thing ever to some people. This was the first time the man ever heard this coming from someone he also loved deeply. It was in that moment of the man reading those words from that message that he knew he was happy. It was the first time in a long time since he was happy. No matter if everything was about to end, he would always love her. It’s amazing how three little words, “I love you”, can change a person’s life. Three little words that could make anyone feel good about themselves. Three little words that can make someone more complete. Three little words that no matter what were one of the greatest things that ever could be said. Three little words that said with the people truly meaning it could change the world. Three little words that weren’t little at all. No matter what language you say it in, “I love you”, could last forever, no matter what the future would be like.

© 2011 The old me

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This could easily be a poem or song.

Posted 9 Years Ago

Sweet. "It was in that moment of the man reading those words from that message that he knew he was happy." Here's the perfect example of a place where you could give the story a shot of emotion. SHOW us his reaction; we can infer that he's happy from your words.

Posted 10 Years Ago

it also sucks a kinfe into your soul and heart and kills.

Posted 10 Years Ago

The impact of saying "I love you" is big, just like the way you've properly explained it and conveyed it here.

Posted 10 Years Ago

Very strong. Good chapter with strong sentiment. Those that have loved deeply can relate. Not a puppy love, but a joining of the spirits.

Posted 10 Years Ago

I agree. Its so wonderful to hear those three little words...

Posted 10 Years Ago

i agree completely...

Posted 10 Years Ago

So romantic. I am glad the man has found happiness and has heard those three little words. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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The old me
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