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Lawn care haiku

Lawn care haiku

A Poem by drave
"

the things we think of during mundane tasks....

"
No more lawn mowing,
Grass never stays how I like,
Quit love....Same reason.

© 2010 drave


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Nicely written. You need a couple of hoofed lawn mowers :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


LOL this is so true. Most everyone hates lawn mowing but you still gotta do it. I likr the middle line, "Grass never stays how I like." Don't we all wish grass didn't grow so much.

Posted 10 Years Ago


You're singing my song.

Posted 10 Years Ago


it's a great haiku, starts from simple things and ends in universal thinking.. well done ~L

Posted 10 Years Ago


I think this is my favorite poem. It's just so...perfect. You go from something simple like the lawn to something vastly complex like love and tie it together with a simple reason. Bravo.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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New to the site..old to writing..trying to kind of kick start a tired muse. I can handle criticism and am definitely looking for new friends/influences/sources/enemies/co-conspirators/nut jobs/ect... more..

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