Lacrimose Melody

Lacrimose Melody

A Poem by Child0fBalance
"

Once again trying to put feelings into words...I'm happy with parts of it, but not others. Trying to get myself to write *something*.

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Sobs give way to

scars.

Wounds become

locks

on internal doors.

Pillows fill the

void

you left in

forsaken sheets.

Hope

is the

mortar

of this

piecemeal heart.

Independence the

façade.

The reality?

Lost.

© 2010 Child0fBalance


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Pillows fill the
void
you left in
forsaken sheets.

Absolutely love that line, just ... love it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


"Pillows fill the
void
you left in
forsaken sheets."

God don't I know how that feels.
This poem makes me think too much and hurt. Nice write. I wish we could both have the men we're still in 'like' with. (can't say love, cause we're a little obsessed)
:-/ *hugs* always.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on March 31, 2010
Last Updated on April 1, 2010
Tags: feeling, emotion

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Child0fBalance
Child0fBalance

NY



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I'm 25 years old and a graduate of Gettysburg College. I've been suffering from writer's block for over a year that has recently cracked, so enjoy my writing past and (hopefully) present. more..

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A Poem by Child0fBalance