Diamond

Diamond

A Poem by df

these dreams he sees falter in and out of reality
the reality he feels seems to erode
like grains of sand in the sea mist

he feels a smile not yet seen
leaving a shutter of a smile of his own
a flash within the ninth circle

he is touched softly beyond reality
and the metal within him turns to nectar
he is her for she is his smile

© 2010 df


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. how enchanting she must be ... for you to do justice to her ravishing presence ... beautifully written ...

Posted 8 Years Ago


You chose an accurate title to highlight the rare beauty of your words...how wonderfully perfect is Your comprehension of what it is to briefly merge souls with another..."he is her for she is his smile"....it is this line that captures me

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on April 18, 2010
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