A Poem by dreaming dame

I just sort of put together a lot of thoughts,so I hope it makes sense to you.


I think of you night and day.

Escape you?I have tried every way,

But your words of love, eyes of truth.

I'm weak,hold me; your strong.

The moments, days without you are so long.


I look up and see your eyes,

I'm never to be free again.

You're still holding me, enchanting.

I feel a loud, quiet sigh,

Your letting me go, I can stand alone.


But no,I can't,

I'm in the dirt.

I've fallen, but you don't see,

You turned around, you've moved on,

I lay in the dust, crying salty tears

of loss and shame,

hear I am; the dying dame.


My greater good, my strength,

has waiked away, moved on.

Once again, hurt triumphs.

It was a battle, it's over now,

and I've lost.

Oh, what i've lost;

I'm losing strength,

no longer in the dust.


My blood, in pools, form crimson mirrors

to the sky, threatning evil

Promising to avenge me, to seek revenge,

But  no, I forbid you to harm him.


Desparetely almost; I call out,

''I need you, please, please help.

I feel my heart slow,10...9...8...

somehow, I keep breathing,


Alas, I can take no more.

I scream in agony,

And my heart;   7...6...5...

I see your eyes once more,

Your eyes!? It's you!

Hold me, mend me.



A confession of love,

your holding me, I feel your strength; hope,

Your eyes, I've been captured and freed,

Your love alone, has restored my life.


I'm alive; we are one,

Our love, together

are the rays of the sun,

telling the world of hope.




© 2014 dreaming dame

Author's Note

dreaming dame
Let me know, wether it's good or bad; I want to know. :)

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Crimson mirrors! The most effective image of the poem!

Posted 6 Years Ago

so beautiful I love it fantastic job

Posted 6 Years Ago

"I'm alive; we are one,

Our love, together

are the rays of the sun,

telling the world of hope.


A wonderful write. I like the ending the most...:)......................

Posted 7 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

dreaming dame

7 Years Ago

Thank you:)
Sami Khalil

7 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)........................
Love and pain together; such a soulful poem, really caught my attention. Emotional but enjoyable - I think alot of people will relate to this, which is great because you're creating an emotional outlet that other people can use :)

Posted 9 Years Ago

very well done

Posted 9 Years Ago

hmm i will say good write keep em coming :)

Posted 9 Years Ago

Totally makes sense to me! Very romantic, passionate and lovely! Great work!

Posted 9 Years Ago

very well written! romantic and hopeful:)

Posted 9 Years Ago

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Nice piece

Posted 9 Years Ago

This is so romanticly well phrased, a yearning of love, and elusiveness, in between your words, totally gasping air out of beauty. I loved this poem so deeply! you're true gifted, please keep on penning and amazing me!

Posted 9 Years Ago

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Added on March 20, 2011
Last Updated on February 26, 2014


dreaming dame
dreaming dame

Southern Ontario, Canada

I'm 18 now, finally the age I dreamed of being as a kid lol. Life has shown that lessons can be taught in a very difficult way.. but I believe in finding the little things of beauty in everyday life.. more..


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