Take My Hand

Take my hand, and walk with me,

Don't let go, just hold me tight.

Mabye then this world just might

Let me loose, set me free.

 

Hold my hand, and wipe my tears.

Guide me, help me leave.

So much pain, I can hardly breathe.

Save me; hide my fears

 

Hold my hand; I'm too weak.

Hold me, I can't stand.

You're my help, the answer I seek.

Please don't go, I'll hold your hand.

 

I can't do this alone,

So let's do this together.

Our love is here for us to own,

So let's just hold each other forever.

Author's Note

:) I'm not sure that this makes a lot of sense, but I postes it anyway.
:) Thank you for reading. And please, if you see any mistakes, then
don't hesitate to tell me. :)

Reviews

[sharonlee]

Makes sense to me.... a heartfelt plea to share life love & strength with someone.
Nicely written.
Peace

[Richard Anthony Goulart]

This is a great piece and even if it didn't make sense(though it definitely does) the thing to know is that Love itself never makes sense so again a wonderful piece of art was put together.

[Coyote Poetry]

A hand in your hand can bring peace and the feeling of safety. I like the kind and gentle desire of this poem. A very nice ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[theopenbook]

you know what when writing about love just dont think whether it makes sense or not:) just write because love is a beautiful feeling to write on:) and you did such a nice job:)

[Yina]

Our love is here for us to own,
So let's just hol each other forever.
WOW. I'm speechless! This is amazing!! You were totally right!!:)

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I like the flow..the need and wanting is evident..it ends with an upbeat..nice job

[Poe Redd]

Love the format, love the rhymes, love you darling. ;) *fave*

[Alicia Hirshey]

this has a sense of need. It is a great write.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

I enjoyed this mostly, has the sense of needing someoe by your side...very nice indeed:)

[Science girl]

I enjoyed it very much! It was simple yet beautiful. Glad I read it! :)