Fine China

Fine China

A Poem by goldenscar__

I see you.
it is always -always- a pleasure
to see you
my heart aches, my flowers wither
I still see you
and like a fine china
I am not allowed to touch you

May or September
It's time to surrender

© 2019 goldenscar__


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goldenscar__
Hiii, m baack

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very lovely piece. This poem runs very smoothly and you created vivid images.
I like the way you emphasized the word "always".
Thank you for sharing :)

Posted 9 Months Ago


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goldenscar__

9 Months Ago

Hello @Leviari,
I'm so happy to know that you liked it..
thank you for reading & welc.. read more

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