Cazy with you

i love writing love poetry......

 

I'm crazy with you,

thoughts that don’t shut off,

constant pounding,

pounding,

pounding heart beats,

beating me senseless,

thumping relentless,

feet racing,

running,

running,

running through my head,

through my mind,

all the time,

time lost,

what is an hour when spent with you,

when walking with you,

when talking with you,

and only you,

there is no one else,

only us two,

the world passes by,

unnoticed to our eyes,

passersby continue on,

hand in hand we walk,

we roam,

every step together,

toward a future,

toward a life,

were we become one,

one love,

one heart,

one mind,

one breathe,

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Dessi]

I think you meant one "breath".
Don't let me distract you from your goals.
We are two familiar souls, Dave W.
I adore this piece.
IF you want to answer... PM me.

[Dessi]

The thoughts, the constant pounding beating me senseless...
You running around in my mind, awake and asleep.
I hear us talking to each other.
Maybe not into a future together... But maybe we will talk like this forever, as friends, David.
You have the brilliant knack for communicating beauty and details. Please just don't answer.
I'm so afraid you'll make it less than what it is. "I just like to write Love poetry."
It's beautiful.

[Dessi]

This is refreshing, Dave W.! I adore the lively attitude this exudes!
Life! Life! Life!
I'm so happy for you.