I believe all of us are seeking a place of peace and happiness. I liked your thoughts and reasons in the poetry. Thank you Dave for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote
Hi Dave,
i see how your lines are precise but visuals appear before I imagine, any write is star writer if he makes the explanation to the reader how he imagined exactly.
I love your love poems where they give smooth fly into unknown places the lovers visit. It's like unconditional love like a ride into sky where the guy wants to show his lover his love of kind so.
People stumble to write what they feel about the person but you could write so easily. It's not like flattering I see in your writings but the feelings which are much loving than girl he wrote for. It's a doubt did you dream about the kind of or the girl made you to feel about. Anyways I see the love is in you.
Jessy Jacob.
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Thankyou Jessy, I hope you are well
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Thank you, Yaerid. I am not well
It doesn't mean I am foolish.
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Im sorry you are not well, I hope the best for you, is your husband well?
Hi Dave, I am divorced. But I assumed and also got married to God. He is only my husband. read moreHi Dave, I am divorced. But I assumed and also got married to God. He is only my husband.
This may look foolish to you I wasn't foolish when I loved god, with full maturity when I was 20 yrs I decided and married god.
Few people had got chance to make love with god. I was rusticated from god by few never even to see him. My god I made and idol and I see him. Though I was about to have kids that plan was also ruined by few and made it as my fate. This hurted me so much. God thought I was cheating him because I married x husband, so god divorced me to him. Now I am totally for god. Maybe god thought I am not with you physically for few reasons few people doesn't want me to live with him, you don't and can't raise kids alone, so he aborted even before I get conceived. I really wanted a kid so much though I have one already. I am not knowing id it s sin that I shouldn't have married life and kid with him. Now I sit in my room eating my own hard work.
I wish nobody should have tough life like me, because I am seeing very tough time losing my son's and married life career money too.
God gave good life to my x husband and my first son and kept second son safe in heaven itself not to come to earth with more sufferings.
How kind god is to me that he is making my life independent not to my parents too. How great my life is sacrificing everything still I have got life to 80 + yrs life time on this earth. Though I never wished long life. I don't know sometimes I did bad karma or good karma what I am going through anyways it's al game on the hands of god what we go threw. Few humans are so strong that they play pivotal role in life.
Sorry for big reply.
I am such a emotional b***h go beyond who ever wants my jug and jar can't even distinguish who is good and God I just lie with everyone who they want to sleep with me. Such a b***h should never exist thats why I sometimes feel my fate is punishing me.
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Oh Im sorry you are divorced, hopfully there is peace and happiness for you
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What do you think what is peace and happiness for me? I don't want those and ever not needed. Those .. read moreWhat do you think what is peace and happiness for me? I don't want those and ever not needed. Those two will come when you feel those and give same to others. I just need God why because I miss him.
Don't know that when I saw him physically my eyes were blinded and when I don't see him my eyes open wide to see him.
Usha
This is my name family kept, actually my mom selected my name and you call me. Very sweetly. I hav kept myself name as Jessy.
The void eternally searches for substance... or maybe it's the other way around (the same thing, different order). The universe is a strange place Dave. A very strange place. There is a place in our universe called Bootes Void... it's an almost inexplicably empty expanse of space/time. Part of me wants to think serenity.... part of me thinks of HP Lovecraft
All I know is I love you. Your words are capable, always surrounding and drawing the reader into the author's beautiful scenes.
Dave W. Whenever you feel like giving up, just stop.
Read about the poets. I'm on my 3rd book on Bukowski.
Some people hate him but he was just a fallible human like us.
Your works are always lovely and inspiring.
Don't ever change.