Something in the Scent

i have no idea.

i found a dark mud that splattered 

mixing like chunky soup

 with crimson blood

that coagulated and darkened to resemble

deep purple bruises of unadjusted lust

believe me! cried my conscious

that this feeling was unable to be resisted

it was listless and tasting of dry leaves

something unwanted that yearned for existence

but bait me not! simple cloudy heart that leads

the fragments of adolescent memories

 to create a boundary of need

a clinging desperate motion for acceptance

it felt. it hurt. it smelled.

it was a rotting formality. 

Reviews

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Wow, its poweful and seemingly came from nowhere. It kind of leaves you hanging, wondering what the number was of the Mack truck that just hit you. It was thrilling. Very nice. I wish more pieces were this adventurous!