Haze

Haze

A Poem by Duke Teager
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Duke @ 01:03:2K9 CMB.SL

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Scattered,
Splattered,
Shackled,
In Sloth, this Broth.

Sphere nor Square,
Darkness nor Glare,
Here nor There,
I Dwell;
in Scare…
-- That you might not be there..!

© 2012 Duke Teager


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seeing things through a haze-
nice write truly
wondering questions without the answers -will you be there or not
thank you for sharing

Posted 11 Years Ago


awesome!

Posted 11 Years Ago


excellent, I have no criticism for this. I like the alliteration and short, "stabbiness" of the lines. Wonderful work.

Posted 12 Years Ago


A short introspective look at the feelings of dependence on another. Confusion can get the best of us when we're not comfortable in our own bodies without that special someone who's not there. Nice one.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on February 6, 2012
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Duke Teager
Duke Teager

Brisbane, QLD, Australia



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