Take Comfort My Love Whoever You Are

Take Comfort My Love Whoever You Are

A Poem by Paladin4life
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This is the heart felt message from a man to his soul mate that he has never met, yet firmly believes she exists. This is his attempt to comfort the love of his life who is surely suffering as much as he from waiting to be joined together.

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Take comfort my love whoever you are

Though I know not your name I'll love from afar

Every beat of my heart echoes blind devotion

To you dear lady, recompence of my emotion

Never have I touched your lips so grand

Nor felt the tender caress of your hand

But still this I know we two shall be one

No force will conquer, our battle is won

My heart burns and my patience is tried

Endless searches, my hope nearly died

But then a spark, I sense something new

Something refreshing like the morning dew

I felt a connection to your very soul

A God sent glimpse, now hope is made whole

I felt you in the core of my being, honest and pure

Forged in heaven our love is forever and sure

Take comfort my love whoever you are

Though I know not your name i'll love from afar

Until the day God our road does mend

And to each the other our Lord does send.

© 2009 Paladin4life


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Author's Note

Paladin4life
Once again I wrote this at work so i will have to look for spelling issues later. I look forward to feedback.

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Aww, this one is sweet, a tender encouragement to the one who is out there.
Have no fear, there is a chica out there who's waiting for just a note like this to send her lil heart
winging it's way into a safe haven with yours, just trust the Lord who has your love story already written, and enjoy the journey on the road to discovering that person.
You only get to walk this road once, make sure you take the time to make some memories! :D
~N.O.

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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Congratulations for winning the Love-Conquers-All Contest!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so beautiful and eloquent. Very well written. I especially love the last two lines.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is good. Full of emotion, and the imagery is great.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautifully written, you have expressed your emotions so perfectly.

I have felt these same thoughts. Wondering of my beloved, what he is like, the way he laughs, whether he is thinking of me as I am thinking of him. Searching and looking and waiting. I'll even admit I've sent him kisses. :D

This one is going into my favorites!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was fantastic! Your skill with words is beautiful. A great story in a poem. :) Good job!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautifully tender.

Take comfort my love whoever you are

Though I know not your name I'll love from afar

Every beat of my heart echoes blind devotion

To you dear lady, recompence of my emotion


Loved it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aww, this one is sweet, a tender encouragement to the one who is out there.
Have no fear, there is a chica out there who's waiting for just a note like this to send her lil heart
winging it's way into a safe haven with yours, just trust the Lord who has your love story already written, and enjoy the journey on the road to discovering that person.
You only get to walk this road once, make sure you take the time to make some memories! :D
~N.O.

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Paladin4life
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