Scorched

Scorched

A Poem by Paladin4life
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I did my best here to write a traditional haiku. This one is a a poem about endurance embodied by life enduring the scorching sun.

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Summer heat scorches
 
Draining moisture from the world
 
Life endures the fire

© 2009 Paladin4life


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Paladin4life
I hope you enjoy my simple attempt at haiku.

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I have enjoyed your single attempt at a haiku...good job!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"Life endures the fire"... OK... I love the way you see summer not only as a season but as a part of life itself. Like the way you related it to what we go through. Brilliant. Simple but impressive.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on September 9, 2009

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Paladin4life
Paladin4life

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Greetings! I am a 28 year old born again Christian, preacher of the gospel of Jesus Christ, as well as the owner of a B.A degree in Psychology. I read the Bible more than anything else, because I base.. more..

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