I wonder why..

I wonder why..

A Poem by Dusk Lavanna
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i thought of this while in math class doing nothing (explains why i'm failing) and its about my ex boyfriend Dennis, who ruined my rep, everywhere, so i hope you enjoy

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sometimes I wonder,
if you ever think of me,
because,
i think of you.
you ruined my being,
my soul,
my friendship,
my life.
i wish i could see you,
just one more time,
to ask you why.
why Dennis?
i know what you are,
 i know who you are,
all i want to know,
 is why you chose her to love,
and me to ruin.
why ruin my life, 
when i have done nothing wrong,
why Dennis?

© 2013 Dusk Lavanna


Author's Note

Dusk Lavanna
i just wrote this today, so ignore the grammer

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Omg..I feel exactly the same! :(

Great writing !

Posted 9 Years Ago


when ever we have a break up, why is the biggest question we have in our mind...love your write and felt your pain... good work my friend

Posted 9 Years Ago


I think everyone asks these questions eventually, great job kid

Posted 10 Years Ago


I don't know what your ex actually did or the reason you broke up, but don't let it ruin your life. Your life isn't over yet and there is plenty of time for things to get better, you have a lot of happiness ahead of you my friend :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Dusk Lavanna

10 Years Ago

well thank you:)
I like your poem because I can relate. Even thought he gives you an answer, you won't be satisfied with it. Use that emotion to keep writing, your doing good.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Dusk Lavanna

10 Years Ago

thank you very much, i hope i never get an answer to be honest, i dont need to know

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Added on November 15, 2013
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Dusk Lavanna
Dusk Lavanna

tomball, TX



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My name is Dusk and i'm a young writer, just starting. I would like to become something from writing one day. i take requests, but if i turn you down i'm sorry, it just means i have no idea how to wri.. more..

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