Kisses

Kisses

A Poem by echo501

Kisses are birds,
Which we hold near our hearts
Silent, secret
They flutter against our chests.

Kisses are flames,
That go to our heads
Burning, beautiful
They capture our thoughts

Kisses are oceans,
That carry me to you
Strong, soft
They bring us together

© 2010 echo501


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echo501
this is a first draft, and i haven't written in a while...

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I like the way you portrayed kisses in a different view point-awesome i likes this piece!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


awesome great write, what can i say you got talent.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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. an exceptionally mellifluous piece of writing ...


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Added on July 3, 2010
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