The bus ride

this is actually true...

Every morning, i get on the bus

Every morning, i have two wishes:

The first is that you will get on the bus at the next stop

The second is that you will not get on and that i will never see you again

There is another wish, bursting at the seems

Waiting to get out the whole 21 blocks

I keep this wish locked up in an iron box

It will never come true

You seem to ignore me, but that doesn't stop me from staring

i'm not sure why you are so magnetic, but the heart wants what it wants

Well, our stop has arrived

Oh, i forgot

My wish...

notice me

Reviews

[xXxCynicalWarsxXx]

This was a melancholy sweet piece, a want that all long for: To be noticed by the one they've fallen for. I truly liked it, and can feel what you feel. Thanks for the post!

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. very enchanting and extremely well-written ...

[Tony]

Ok....
I like it.
nothing burns like young love.