In This Dreamish Age

In This Dreamish Age

A Poem by Echoes of Eros
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Let me be your solitary ocean

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Let me be your solitary ocean

Swallowing you inside my waves

Carrying you endlessly in my currents

Where all becomes passion’s peace

In this dreamish Age of Pisces

In this wilding Age of Aquarius

We remember the flight of Aphrodite

Memorialize the rescue of Eros

Bound together in their hiding

Safe in your mysterious waters

Waters flowing in jade and aquamarine

Divine breath whispers over me

In the echoes of our halcyon seas

And I clothe you in sacred fabric

Only the clothing of a goddess

For you are heaven's poem now alive

That I will read into deep forevers

You are my soul's song so sublime

In ripples and rhythm on every wave

Come, come rest in my currents

Let me carry you day and night

And wash rich ecstasy over you

So that all you will ever remember

Is joy in your beautiful blood

Only serenity flooding your mind

© 2016 Echoes of Eros


Author's Note

Echoes of Eros
“In one drop of water are found all the secrets of all the oceans; in one aspect of You are found all the aspects of existence.”
― Kahlil Gibran

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You have so much beautiful mysticism here, this takes her to a dream world where only her and her sacred lover exists. :)
Your words are pure bliss, your style so original, there's no one on this planet like you. Please continue speaking life to my soul. :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Echoes of Eros

4 Years Ago

Thank you for your divine comments. :) I read your words and know you understand, you know there is .. read more



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Beautiful blood speaks loud to me ... amazing work with beautiful imagery .. your muse for your work must be impressing

Posted 4 Years Ago


Echoes of Eros

4 Years Ago

I so deeply appreciate your words, and your precious time to take in my thoughts. xo
Writing Angel

4 Years Ago

They are all well worth it
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Regarding the title, it reads like a dedication to youth but it's more like an offering now after I read. It's woven pretty nicely, with all those lovely and rich images of the ocean and shades of blue.

Definitely your divine style again.

I love your quote btw.

Posted 4 Years Ago


V

4 Years Ago

I've been here all the time, only a tad more silent.. I still don't review much, only stick to rando.. read more
Echoes of Eros

4 Years Ago

Let your soul find all you need to soar again, in stillness, in silence, and sweet convos. Want you .. read more
V

4 Years Ago

Thank you. I try to be a little more light-hearted..
The vastness and richness of the oceans is so akin to love. And to love is to take a leap of faith, in free fall, trusting the ocean. Your inspiring poetry is a thing of beauty and joy.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Echoes of Eros

4 Years Ago

Truly even the shadow of your presence is light. May you find yourself only becoming more of the sea.. read more
DIVYA

4 Years Ago

Thank you dear Eros...
I always enjoy the mythological references you use on your poems. And the words you choose to describe a scenario or a person are always beyond ordinary and that gives your poetry a sublime tone. Your texts make me wanna write more and I really appreciate them for that. Keep up the amazing work.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Echoes of Eros

4 Years Ago

There could be no sweeter praise than my words awakening your heart to inspirations. Thank you, dear.. read more
Such passion within these lines...oh, how you stir my imagination! Perhaps my muse will take flight yet!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Echoes of Eros

4 Years Ago

Dear Kelly, I appreciate you so much. May your imaginations always be stirred to pure fire. xo
Your words always stir deeply, 'tis a magical journey and experience reading you :) Gentle and appreciative, loving and calm...beautiful combination that made the soul sigh and the heart smile :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


Echoes of Eros

4 Years Ago

It is always bliss to see you've been by, sweet poet. Giving such everlasting thanks. xo
Beautiful words written dear Poet.
"For you are heaven's poem now alive
That I will read into deep forevers
You are my soul's song so sublime
In ripples and rhythm on every wave"
The above lines. Perfect and needed. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 4 Years Ago


Echoes of Eros

4 Years Ago

So glad to have you at the cafe, Coyote. You lift us all.
Coyote Poetry

4 Years Ago

You are very kind and you are welcome.
Beautiful poem! I enjoyed it very much! Blessed Be!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Echoes of Eros

4 Years Ago

Blessings to you, Haley! I appreciate your soul's presence here. xo
Haley Harrigan

4 Years Ago

Thank you!
Why haven't more people reviewed this?!

What a wonderful dream-stance piece this is. Phrase by phrase you've woven past influences and depths to describe your emotions; they're enfolded by the heavens, the ancients and gods, the beauty about. Seems you've used every moment of the past's influences to magnify your love. Or, perhaps, adoration - yes, adoration, because that's what and how it is.

More than beautiful:

'For you are heaven's poem now alive
That I will read into deep forevers
You are my soul's song so sublime
In ripples and rhythm on every wave.. '

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Echoes of Eros

4 Years Ago

Your post gave me much Monday happiness, emmajoy. Thank you for elevating my words into these sacred.. read more

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