To Love.

To Love.

A Poem by Eddy Jones
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Wonders we'll share Each path will lead us there

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Rictameter : To Love.

 

 

 

To love

Wonders we'll share

Each path will lead us there

Each breath we breathe;each song we sing

Hold my hand and believe,no doubts, no pains

The open air is paradise

The path to each heart shines

A golden gift

To love.

 

 

Haiku: In Your Heart I Belong.

 

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Oh how you beckon

In your heart I do belong

An aria a song

 

Acrostic: To Love.

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Treasured and precious

Oh how I rejoice

x

Lay your head on my shoulder

Orchestral love songs prevail

Verifications so honest so true

Eternal love bathed in honesty, in life.



Monorhyme:Find Your Dreams And Follow.

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Caress that heart so mellow

Your stiff pride you must swallow

Your heart cannot be shallow

Find your dreams and follow

In your wondrous love song.


Rhyme:Is Each Story Told A Myth??

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Is each story told a myth

Is each promise made to be broken

Is the sunshine behind each cloud

Is each dream to be forsaken.

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Will we find it in our hearts to forgive

Will each broken heart still shine;

Will there be a reason to care

Follow this heart of mine.

x

Will there still be lessons to be learnt

Will ther still be songs to be sung

Will there still be wonders to be seen

To this loving new life I clung.


Freeverse:That Magical Place Called Love.

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A place which is there for us all?

That magical place called LOVE.


A place where time stands still;

where worries and doubts do not linger.

That magical place called LOVE.



A place where we will never be lonely

where our hearts will never be pained;

each hunger sated

and each thirst refreshed.

That magical place called LOVE.



Fresh fields and daisy chains;

light footsteps

and happy hearts

will lead us to

That magical place called LOVE.



To be alone when surrounded by people

a room so vacant

although so full.

A heart so pained

even though lips smile.

Follow your road

follow your path

To that magical place called LOVE.



Each silence can be so loud

each sunshine behind each cloud.

but each heart sings

happy days they'll bring

as we find our way

To that magical place called LOVE.



Oh how the skies are blue

Oh my beautiful white dove;

Together we'll find

That magical lace called LOVE

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© 2013 Eddy Jones


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These are all beautiful love poems. I like how the first one reaches out at the center, grasping. Perhaps using the first two line of your first poem you could try this format for another poem:

Down paths that we share,
great wonders will stir.

Now the list all the wonders using rhyming couplets.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Eddy Jones

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much Aethreal for taking the time to stop by and comment.



Reviews

i like these, but...the senryu is absolutely perfect.

jacob

Posted 11 Years Ago


INTRODUCTION

SUGGESTIONS

1. As a suggestion, I would put each poem into a separate writing so the audience can focus one at a time.

LOVE POEM OF FOCUS

1. Rictameter : To Love.

Vocabulary I Love:

1. Rictameter: I love the lyrical voice that is hidden in the poetry as we read it out loud.

2. A golden gift: This is an interesting color choice. Red is often what it is often chosen for love. However, I like how you replaced the generic color. Well done!

Subjectively, a "golden gift" means precious.

Why golden?

3. Paradise: I love the reference to paradise. It is beauty. It is love. It is not religion. It is spiritual.

Well done yet again!

CONCLUSION

1. The rest of the poetry was just as beautiful. However, I would have dissected it piece by piece if each was separate. The format is an original idea. I am just unsure if I like it, to be honest.

2. The pictures are wonderful! They compliment the poetry well.

3. What made you choose this format?

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Eddy Jones

11 Years Ago

Oh thank you so much for this indepth advice comment;it is so appreciated and I shall most certainly.. read more
Vria P Crow

11 Years Ago

You are very welcome:D I am happy that my advice helped! Photography is beauty; it captures realis.. read more
Beautiful poetry. Thank you for brightening my gloomy Tuesday morning Eddy. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Eddy Jones

11 Years Ago

You are so very welcome 'writing by' KS and I look forward to reading your work also.
Your com.. read more
"writing by" KS

11 Years Ago

:)
i am so pleased to meet someone else who enjoys writing in form Eddy, it isn't overly popular on this site so you get a big thumbs up from me..your poetry is delightful..

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Eddy Jones

11 Years Ago

Oh thank you so much Stella and looking forward to reading your poetry too.
Eddy.
They are all beautiful heartwarming poems. Wonderful works

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Eddy Jones

11 Years Ago

Thank you so very much The Girl That Let You Go and here's to so many more for us both to share on h.. read more
The Girl That Let You Go

11 Years Ago

Indeed ma'am, to the many more to come :D
Absolutely gorgeous, friend

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Eddy Jones

11 Years Ago

Thank you so very much lisat and here's to many many more for us both to share on here.
Havea .. read more
This one has left me smiling, and my mind...ohhh its wandering some places ..*Smiles*

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Eddy Jones

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much Cassie your comment greatly appreciated.
You cover so much ground here in what is a vast subject, it becomes a little too much if you don't mind me saying so. I feel that publishing seperately would heighten the impact of these real gems to love.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ken Simm.

11 Years Ago

And welcome to WC. I'm sure you will enjoy.
Eddy Jones

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much Ken and your advice taken on board greatly appreciated.
These are all beautiful love poems. I like how the first one reaches out at the center, grasping. Perhaps using the first two line of your first poem you could try this format for another poem:

Down paths that we share,
great wonders will stir.

Now the list all the wonders using rhyming couplets.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Eddy Jones

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much Aethreal for taking the time to stop by and comment.
I read the pieces as spellbound.
They are so magical and enjoyable!

You may love to post each piece separately.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

11 Years Ago

This is a good day for the writers of WC too.
They have found a new writer who is talented and.. read more
Eddy Jones

11 Years Ago

Oh thank you so much zainul ;your comment so appreciated and thank you also for making me feel so we.. read more
zainul

11 Years Ago

This is all my pleasure :)

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Eddy Jones
Eddy Jones

Wales, South Wales, United Kingdom



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