Weapon Rant (Violent)

Weapon Rant (Violent)

A Poem by Ian Duncan Arbogast
"

There are many ways to have fun...

"

Pull a knife

Grab a gun

End a life

Have some fun

Take a stab

Take a slice

Hit the abs

Do it twice

Wield a sword

Slide it out

Strike a pose

Shed your doubt

Plunge it in

Yank it out

Put it down

Different route

Pick it up 

Pull it back

Pull the trigger and watch it clack

Light it up

Burn it down

Try it out on your favorite town

Dish out one 

Dish out three

Use someone's head

not a healthy tree

Splatter

Splatter

Drip 

Drip

Pistol 

Pistol

Rip 

Rip

Puddle 

Puddle

Fun 

Fun

Go away

This poem's done



 

 

 

 

 

© 2009 Ian Duncan Arbogast


Author's Note

Ian Duncan Arbogast
I was feeling evil lol

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vicious, but i absolutely loved it ^_^

Posted 12 Years Ago


Great job on this poem very nice steady beat and did not fail to interest me. keep writing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


nice!!!!!! its the most blunt thing ive read on this site. i like that. your not afraid to write whats on your mind. nice. continue the good work!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like that s**t, fun read.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i am also sensing some deeply sexual undertones to this piece, with all the short and staggered phrases playing nicely into a rhythmic build up. well done, exciting!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lovin' the positive feedback, keep it comin'!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I like the childish tone, how you juxtaposed the rough subject with a light approach. It makes me think of evil, smiling clowns, having fun with death, hurting a scared child like a cat plays with a mouse.

Keep writing, good work!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That's wonderful. I love it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

haha the ending is so funny! I never knew a person who can make murder and violence seem like a good thing lol. I LOVE the rhyming and it was surprisingly an enjoyable read even though it was a gory topic lol.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Ian Duncan Arbogast
Ian Duncan Arbogast

North Ridgeville, OH



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Cheers, everyone~! My name Is Ian Arbogast. I don't write much anymore, but I implore you to browse my adolescent writings and hopefully some new ones in the future! Have a nice day~! more..

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