Seaweed

Seaweed

A Poem by Edie Blue Starfish
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Seaweed dreams
Tangled up in memories of you
Always dragging me down
Even when you're not around

© 2019 Edie Blue Starfish


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Short and sweet and a bit sad but Hopefully maybe some time that seaweed becomes a flotation device

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Edie Blue Starfish

1 Month Ago

Thanks very much Bunny. :)
dear Edie Blue... your poem is very emotional.
It is also a fresh and creative way to describe
being entangled and taken down in a romance.
Your talent is exceptional. truly, Pat

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Edie Blue Starfish

1 Month Ago

Thank you for the lovely comment and sorry for the late reply. :)
Patricia Wedel

1 Month Ago

Some flowers wait until July to bloom... even so,
we capture the beauty of words in colors p.. read more

Short, kinda sweet but with a bitter aftertaste methinks... very muchly enjoyed my friend.. Neville

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville Pettitt

1 Month Ago

sounds like we have both been having fun :)
Edie Blue Starfish

1 Month Ago

in the sun :)
Neville Pettitt

1 Month Ago

Yeah.. that too :)
I love the ocean
I hate swimming in it, and being accosted by that slimy awfulness, however....
Somewhat like a nightmare, pleasant REM-ing...
Then BOOM....
Slimy...

Ugh

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Edie Blue Starfish

1 Month Ago

nice of you to stop by again, thank you for the visit
Silente-Write

1 Month Ago

Did you know my name means King/god/prince/w.e of the ocean? I loveee the ocean...
A pleasure.. read more
Seaweed conjures up a whole host of sensations, few of them pleasant, so you picked a great metaphor for how some people just inherently drag us down, complete with the brackish fishy odor & swarming flies *wink! wink!* (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Edie Blue Starfish

1 Month Ago

thank you for that Margie :)
Wind swept and interesting with a salty aftertaste, lol.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Edie Blue Starfish

1 Month Ago

thank you for reading my poem :)
Just so short! Wow! This is beautiful.
I feel the emotion that flows within my mind in that microseconds of reading.

Good one.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Edie Blue Starfish

1 Month Ago

thank you for reading and commenting, Kay
Love this analogy and the impact of this short but expressive verse. The images you impart with the seaweed tumbling in and out on the tide and the drowning in sorrow are very poignant.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Edie Blue Starfish

1 Month Ago

thanks so much John
nice metaphor here, sadness in the topic.

i have swum in enough lakes to deal with that seaweed thing...getting caught in it...in relationships as well.
j.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Edie Blue Starfish

1 Month Ago

many thanks jacob
I love this little piece of brevity. It says so much. Seaweed dreams, tangled with memories, so very visual Edie.

Chris

Posted 1 Month Ago


Edie Blue Starfish

1 Month Ago

thanks very much chris
Christine Anne Shaw

1 Month Ago

You are welcome Edie.

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