just to say

try to say the words

My eyes capture the coming of your presence

let my hand embrace your shoulder

Say the words of  burden that kept inside

want to make you feel save with my spellbinder

sing a song of love  for you

let your tear that drops be swipe away

and the sounds of melody entertain you

touch the heart so gently

your love like a fountain for a thirsty soul

resurrect  and revive the life of my love

even it's  not be saying  by words  

but  the melody sounding so much clearly

never be enough of your passionately love

Make me so addicted and wanting more than before

nothing could compare the touch of your love

a love that never stop to amaze

Diving more deeper into your love

make me fall deeper into your loving arm

let me drawn forever in your ocean of  love

forever living inside your love

Reviews

[Anne Timmins]

This is an excellent write full of "cool" language and imagery. It has a nice feel and flow to it! One minor thing, "cause" is not a word, it is spelled "because"

[Edward Lancheister]

thanks Anne for have take a review and correction with honestly

[Edward Lancheister]

Oh Nyong, this is truly nostalgic, love the music, and the flow of your piece.
So much comfort, and family hood in this piece. This could be a song itself, my friend.

Terima Kasih for sharing.

- Nona Eli

[Edward Lancheister]

Love and passion give a comfort, safe place that give us a warm embrace

terima kasih kembali Nona Manise

Edward

Love and Passion do... :) Indah tinta ... :)

[Edward Lancheister]

love that could never be enough. menjadi makanan untuk jiwa ku ( food to my soul ) :)

[Donald]

I very interesting piece. I am impressed.

[Edward Lancheister]

thank you Donald for have time to read and review

Edward